Thank you for pointing that out -- no one else had caught it, or if they did, they didn't bother to say. I have read the source material, repeatedly, but since I wrote and posted from work, research, not so much of an option.
I'll dredge out the TPBs and look into revision this weekend.
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Date: 2005-06-29 07:12 pm (UTC)I'll dredge out the TPBs and look into revision this weekend.